Poem -

The Vision of The Dancing Woman by the Trees

The Vision of The Dancing Woman by the Trees

Somebody once told me

 that negativity

would always seek out my company

But I saw with my own eyes

That fucker

skating away like a coward

And your point of view

Hanging like a painting

covered in ambient light

 changing the course

Of my dark destiny

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Christopher Correia

Bless your heart, Cherie Sumner, what a nice comment to give, it's kind of ironic that I was getting angry at myself in this poem, because I'm a negative man, sad to say, it's terrible when the enemy is self, and yes most definitely one person can shift an attitude, with time and cooperation, and thank God for that, thank you as well for encouraging comment 

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Jai Masters

So much to take in here Chris,

a fantastic self disclosure poem! 

Images await!! 

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Christopher Correia

hey Jai, and yes you're right everything you need to know about me is in this poem, hey did you see the dancing woman in the trees?  On the left three trees in, the fourth tree messes hides her view, good comment Jai, I like it, thanks

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