When It Rains
When It Rains
Through all the joy true love sustains
I feel great comfort when it rains.
For when I’m feeling sad and blue,
it’s nice to know that God cries too.
My sanity, I must maintain
to live my life—just start again.
In troubled times of pain and strife,
He sees me through this tortured life.
Until, one day, I’ll cease to be
and He alone will comfort me.
“Welcome, my child," He’ll softly speak,
then gently kiss my ruddy cheek.
“I’ve seen the torment you’ve been through
yet knew you’d know just what to do.
I've shaded you on hottest days—
remained beside you all the way.”
"No longer shall you feel the hurt
You did your time, you've tilled the dirt.
In Paradise, your soul remains—
awash in comfort when it rains."
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Sad but very beautiful.... I love the fluidity of this piece and how straight forward it is while achieving a great depth of emotions. Well done !
Hugs K.Â
Thank you, K.
Just feelin' kinda spiritual right now.
I deeply appreciate the read.
~Dean âśž
Great piece of work Deano
Thank you very much, KIERAN.
I sincerely appreciate your R&R.
Best wishes,
~Dean
I love this verse, a bit different from some of your work, but wonderfully written!
Faith
Thank you, Faith.
Yes, it's quite a deviation from my usual horror/dark poetic fare.
But even I have to crawl out from my crumbling crypt every now and then.
It gets stuffy in there!
My skin's as white as flour, and my eyes have difficulty adjusting to the sunlight.
But, I'll be back to my old, dark ways in no time, heh-heh.
Thanks so much again!
~Dean ;}
This is like reading a piece from  a more hidden you...I find it a departure from the style I have come to expect and enjoy  but I have to say..this moved me SO much Dean! Such  a beautiful composition that I have pinned it for future reading.Love your cameleon style my friend..you are a writer of unfathomable and  surprising depth but with the literary means to reach out and fascinate your audience...Nice work !!
Lodigiana xx
I really, really appreciate you taking the time to read and respond to this, Lodigiana.
Prior to my heart attack in 2010 and NDE (near death experience) this is the type of poetry I wrote all the time.
But after I went to wherever it was I went when I was declared dead for almost four minutes something inside me changed.
That's when I began writing and publishing dark poetry and short horror stories.
Couple that with PTSD from my experiences as a Marine Corps sniper for three years and...well...
Anyhow, thanks so much again.
Pleasant Screams!
~Dean ~?♥?♥?~
lovely write x
Thank you very much, Susan.
I sincerely appreciate your comments.
~Dean :)
Beautifully deep and powerful well done ... truly inspired by your mind xxxx