Poem -
When I'm gone
Hope there's someone
Hope there's someone
..... and I hope you laugh
Just like in our worn, old photograph
When we'd waste long days in cornfields, under fervent, homely sun
Laughing, just laughing, until the day, too soon, was done.
I hope they grow real close to that crease above your nose
That wakens just before you laugh
Love it more as love grows
Just the way that I have
I hope they know just what makes you smile
When shining eyes crinkle with mischief for a while
Flash to azure from deep blue
Drunkenly swim into them as I would do
God I hope there's someone
But most of all..
.... I hope you laugh
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Love the sentiment, the delivery, what I felt as a conclusion! Wonderful write !............................................................Jim PS "When bright blue eyes crinkle with mischief for a while" love this endearing line!
Thanks Jim, I appreciate the read and comment, written from genuine memories
Thanks 🙏
Oh this is just sooo well written! Written from genuine love. There is such a deep underlying current beneath the overlying sentiment. These beautiful, gently written words are, in fact, a absolutely powerful. It's a beautiful poem packed to the rafters with emotion. Thank you so much for posting. Your work is outstanding x
Thanks so much Tina. It is written from the heart, I find that they are much appreciated by the reader too when they are. I know that may be stating the obvious to some but it is something that I only recently learned 😊
Nicely written.
Come again on the 22nd, and wish your Christmas is surrounded with joyous.
PS 2020-12-31
Wish you a New Year be peaceful and healthy wherever you are.
Awww a heartfelt write Pen! I was also here to wish you a happy holidays and new year my friend. Keep posting cause your poems are inspiring to me. Peace and smiles. The Fish of the Sea... didnt mean for that to rhyme...