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You Are More Than You Believe

You Are More Than You Believe

He says that he is hopeless,
But I know him, And I know that, when he says,
He wants to live less than he wants his death,
If I threw him in water, I know he would most definitely hold his breath,
Therefore, in my heart I know he is not hopeless but that his hope is harder to find,
In addition, that if I showed you all you could become,
I know that you would change your mind,
You will hit rock bottom,
But where better to start,
Where the only thing you can do is better,
Where all you can hear is your heart,
You have to almost lose it,
 to remember you have had it,
you will remember all the good and all the bad times,
so don’t wait for your ending,
until your last breath starts to leave,
 before you finally remember my love,
how much you liked to breath.
 
For my beloved DC.
 
~J.B.
 

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Richard Waters

Beautiful comforting affectionate expression !
Thanks for sharing.  :)

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Dean Kuch

This is a poignantly poetic, melancholy musing for certain, Jaelyn.
There are also some beautiful sentiments expressed here as well.
Lovely...
~Dean Kuch (Cook)
"Kuch" is the German variant of "Cook", my true last name, and pronounced the same way—with a hard "ch"...

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jaelyn bartusiak

thank you so much, and that is a very interesting name Dean Kuch <3

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Dean Kuch

My publisher suggested I change it to Kuch, from Cook, for marketing purposes.
The switch was made to make people think subliminally of Dean Koontz, a popular horror novelist.
Dean Kuch, Dean Koontz...see?
Anyhow, enough about that. You're more than welcome,
~DC  :)

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jaelyn bartusiak

thank you so much, i believe everyone has the ability to help another. everyone needs a boost sometimes. and when your at the bottom the only place you can go is up. thank you for taking the time sweet Cherie <3
 

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