You Move Me
When I wake, each breath I take, is focused upon you.
Hearts circumvent the tears we've spent to know our love is true.
When you’re near, I’ve found, my dear, the world’s a brighter place.
All my pain just disappears whene’er I see your face.
When we touch, my heart, as such, explodes in ecstasy.
We cling and clutch and laugh so much—you’re everything to me.
The heat we feel is all too real—there can be no mistake
that you and I don’t have to try to cause the earth to quake.
Just as the moon drives waves to swoon upon a sandy shore,
your tender tides of love subside to leave me wanting more.
So, from afar I search each star for answers that I seek.
A bonny bliss comes with each kiss to leave me feeling weak.
And so, I leave you with this thought wrought from such perfect love,
if you should go, just always know, it’s you I’m dreaming of.
There will ne'er be someone for me who’d ev'r take your place.
Although I know loves come and go—I’ll always see your face.
Comments
A committed write worthy of favourable appraisal. You share heart and soul with an intensity well beyond accepted horizons. Work of distinction.
Take care my friend.
Thanks... ツ
This is such a romantic write, Dean. Beautiful 👏👏👏👏👏👏
Tina x
Thanks so much for reading, Tina.
I'm very grateful to you for your comments.
Warmest wishes,
~Dean ღ
wow wow wow!!! Dean what great poem a masterpiece well done
I'm really glad you enjoyed this, Greg. It's obviously a bit more subdued than my usual poetic fare.
Thanks very much for the positive feedback.
~Dean ツ
Such a beautiful poem and I love the flow of it as well!
Thank you very much, Sophia.
I appreciate your thoughtful comments.
~Dean ツ
This is a song .......a lyric line of impeccable timing......I could do music for this so EASILY!!.....It's THAT good!!......and I LOVE the final line immensely.....there's such beauty in truth!!.......smokin' grooves SIR KUCH!!......smokin' grooves!!......T xo 🎼🎸 😉
Thank you for taking time away from your own work to read and comment on this, Tony.
Romantic poetry is not exactly my forte. However, I do remember how nice, safe and warm it felt to be in love...once.
Take care, my friend.
~Dean ツ
Your poetry oozes with passionate lyricism ... loved it
What a nice thing to say.
Thank you, Leah!
~Deanღ
a common sentiment, in my humble opinion it weakens the essence, of this romantic write...
All and all a wonderful read✍
I made changes to that line to avoid sounding so cliché.
Thanks for reading.
Warmest wishes,
~Dean
Love and respect to you my friend, but make no mistake that a Mediocre like myself wouldn't every now and again slap you on the wrist lol.
I am familiar with your masterful ink 😉
In respect to the craft we can hold each other's hand, and not always allow pleasantries to cloud our better judgement ...
No, I appreciate being made to reach a little deeper, Merrill. That just makes us better at what we do.
Thanks again!
You're welcome my friend 😊👍
Thank you as well for this romance of pitch.. Man it striked me out.. Very good. Biggining to end.. God bless you.
Thanks so much, Joey.
I appreciate your comments.
Enjoy the week ahead.
~Dean ♠♪♫ ツ
I see we both know REAL LOVE, a love that hasn’t a choice, a love that hasn’t a care, I love that never ends is what true love is...
Thank you very much for reading, Bill.
I sincerely appreciate your feedback, as always.
Have a grrrrrrrrrreat week ahead.
~Dean ツ
I know
exactly how you feel.
coming from a girl once living and loving a polygamous lifestyle and swore to never give it up and now... I just cant see the point without my weirdo.
See?
You've expressed yourself perfectly, Twilla.
I just knew you had it in ya, heh-heh.
Thanks so much for reading and responding.
I am very grateful for your feedback.
~Dean :}
Eh, I'm still right. I was expressing myself in text 😜 I'm quite stubborn. Over look my madness, love.