Prey

Clop, clop, clop, clopâŚ
The young girl draw near the awaiting corner. Dark, but with a hint of day. January 3rd, Winter. The brisk weather turned her breath into clouds. She had a steady rhythm. Perfect timing to her movement.
Clop, clop, clop, clopâŚ
4inch black stiletto knee high boots which she purchased at Office, 12th December. She liked them very much; they made her feel professional and profound. Not to mention the wonders it made her legs look. Her legs were long and elegant. Ex-ballerina. Light on her feet. A knee length skirt weaved in and out between her legs from her movement.
Clop, clop, clop, clopâŚ
Sound of anticipation, as she carries her Vero Moda handbag and leather gloves caressing her dainty hands, which she had manicured the day before, January 2nd. She was clean, neat and tidy and a bundle of fresh air. Her skin is nourished with expensive Ted Baker lotion, which leaves her skin smooth and soft.
Clop, clop, clop, clopâŚ
The sound of her heels walking across the road. Her caramel hair ever so gently blows in the faint wind. Her eyes were tired, but they always shined. Blue. Full of life.
Clop, clopclop, clop, clopclopâŚ
The gasp of a shocked woman filled my ear. She clutched onto my bag strap holding herself up from falling over. Her touch gave me electric shots down my shoulder.
âShi- Iâm ever so sorry. I didnât see you there.â I said apologetically. I propped her up with both my hands against each forearm. She was a lot smaller than expected, so fragile. Perfect proportions. I stepped back and gave her time to straighten her jacket and fix her hair.
âThatâs quite alright, equally as guilty.â She said breathlessly but giggled. She began to pick up pace in the opposite direction as me. I couldnât help but stare at her legs. My hand glided into my pocket and pulled out again.
âWait, you dropped something!â I lied. She turned around confused and fiddled around in her bag. Her heels dragging themselves towards me. I handed over her office pen.
âAh, must of took it from work.. Uh, thanks.â She smiled half-heartedly. She wanted to get away from me, who could blame her. It was getting dark and cold. But I smiled at her and scratched my head.
âActually, Iâm a little bit lost. Iâm looking for Blake House, yaâknow, the hotel.â I asked, innocently. Looking at her with hope. She looked back at me, looked ahead of me, behind her. She was hesitant. I could feel panic radiating off her. She looked at her watch.
âItâs okay, if youâre busy. Iâll keep looking around; Iâve got a torch.â I said factually and sympathetically. âThanks anyway Miss.â I was just about to turn around but I noticed her body flex slightly.
âNo, no. Itâs not far. Itâs just âround this corner and keep going straight.â She helpfully replied. Her voice echoed through my ears and made my head tingle.
âWhich corner?â I asked flatly. She huffed at this request as if I was a nuisance. She had been known for a temper. She scuttled past me leaving behind a fragrance of Euphoria by Calvin Klein, her favourite perfume. Filling my senses, senseless. I turned round to follow her and watched her tiny arm point to the right of her as she peered around and explained with her back to me where to go. My hand hovered by her left ear.
âJust keep going on, you can see from here the white pillars, jus-â
One hard and quick movement, the brick wall will do the work. Her temple was bleeding onto her blushing cheek and down her slender neck. I held her position with my hand on her waist and other hand on her shoulder. I swung her round gently and her eyes were shut and mouth slightly open. I could still feel a tickle of air coming from her throat. I breathed in.
A red Ford focus came screeching round the corner and stopped suddenly by my feet. Gary swung open the drivers door and then ran round the car to open both passenger and back doors. I picked Sophia up into my tattooed arms and gently lay her in the back of the car. Almost like she was sleeping. Slamming all three doors. We sped away through the thin road with beats of lamplight hitting the glass.
âWhoâs this one then?â Gary grunted, with his discoloured teeth and chapped lips. An aroma coming from Gary of alcohol and cigarettes covered the beautiful scent of Sophia.
âA daughter, a sister, a mother. Thatâs all you will hear till youâre questioned.â
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Wow, dark and descriptive. It moves seamlessly from an almost romantic description to something more sinister.
An obsession. Sort of an infatuation of a dark mind.
Did you enjoy the story as it is? Or would you read more?
Thanks so much for the comment Marc :)Â
I'd definitely want to read more :-)
Watch this space then Marc, might see a few more paragraphs! :)
Enjoyed. your dialogues are really smooth and carry the reader along. You are a very good story teller and even better writer. nicely done
Paul, thank you so so much! You don't know how much it warms me to be told this!
Really thrilled you liked it. Have a nice week!
Brilliant Emma! You have quite the knack for story telling. 5 stars from this fanÂ
Yesenia, so pleasing to see such strong feedback!
Thank you again! :)