Poem -
Why Nothing Falls Together
just another take on reality ..
I cannot think of you without
my seeing her ..
Then I get the strangest feeling
itās like a union
occurs somewhere between my
memories, perceptions
and our collective unconscious ..
But nothing ever
falls together these days does it ..
It just seems
to keep falling apart, as always ..
So when I do
think back on the times we once
shared, it now all
seems fragmented and distanced ..
Still, I canāt help but
smile at the tears you then shed
for one moment
back then, I thought, I might just
have meant something ..
Ā
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Comments
Feelings beautifully expressed,
words smartly said.Ā
How have you been, Neville?Ā
Bless you Bernadete .. You just made me smile .. I'm not too bad now my friend at least I'm moving in the write direction at last .. Hope all is good with you n yours .. NevilleĀ
One word:
Forlorn.
Good work. I relate lol
Cheers Rory,
RegardsĀ NevilleĀ
Hello Nev...
Heartache at its finest?
Beautiful write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong Ice Queen
Thank you kindly & truly tooly .. NevilleĀ
A baring of the soul in the most poetic way Nev. Do you ever wish you could live it all again... course you do. We all do...question is... would we really change anything? A lovely piece my friend and its good to see you back x
Thanks a million & truly Marion, I do so appreciate you checking in .. The answer to your question is .. possibly .. but that depends on what seems to be cracking or kicking off at any given time .. Here's me just over the water both waving and hoping the following X reaches you you well XĀ
Oooh, Neville, ouch!Ā Now, who could go and break your heart?Ā The poem is gorgeous. It really is x
This is an oldie .. like me .. I'm almost over it .. but it serves to remind me of what once was .. and the aftermath or legacy someone can have on another .. Thanks for making me smile again Tina xx