Alone in the Dark
Alone here in the dark, only sounds of my beating heart
Thats when the tears shall fall, this silent pain and
cry of sorrow, how will I make it through tomorrow.
I feel so alone I reach out to touch you, I can't see,
it's so dark, the emptiness tears my heart.
Where are you I cry, as darkness draws near
tears soak my pillow where no one can hear.
The silence is more than I can bare, thoughts fill
my head, as I lay here in my bed. It's cold, it's dark,
why did you have to break my heart.
The voices inside my head are screaming,
where are you, don't leave, all I can do is grieve.
I am afraid it's too late, there is nothing I can do
but lay here and cry for you.
It's so cold, and dark, why did we have to part.
The light draws near, you say I have nothing to fear.
I must go on and act like nothing is wrong.
I go through the motions of life,
but I will be here again when it's night....
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This is the first poem I have ever shared. Please give some honest feedback. I would love it and it would be so helpful. Thank you
Hi Poetess Jacqueline Cain,
Welcome to Cosmo poetry family, Your poem is good, lovely, my applause, my five stars, I love the below lines,
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
I;ve always been a sucker for narrative poetry and your heartfelt experience talked to me,,,Thanks for sharing
Thank you. I do not really know the different types of poetry. I just write from my heart & soul. I have never taken classes or anything. Now that I am at a place with time on my hands I am interested in learning about poetry. I feel like music, poetry is up to interpretation by the reader. First off find out what the different types of poetry are... Lol.
Hey J!!.....I think you're right!!......you're in the right place..........this is a very accepting and interested community........not interesting (not that we're boring or anything)........but interested community of poets and authors and painters willing to help you and learn from you as well........symbiotic if you will..........your first effort here has made an impression ........keep it up.......you will find that you make many friends........simply by being yourself.......and judging by your first write here..........you'll be great........well done my friend......and......Welcome to COSMO!!..........smiles........T xx
Thanks Tony!
I really love your style of writing! Welcome to Cosmo!! I look forward to reading more from you! 5*s!
Val ♥️
Good write Jacqueline i understand completely, a person with a broken heart is so alone left with darkness and despair. Congratulations on your fb promotion.
Thank you Devon. What is a fb promotion?? Lol
Beautiful. Welcome to Cosmo and keep sharing.
BB
I stand and applaud this poem, really good.
Thank you that's probably more than it deserves!!!!