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Alone in the Dark

Alone in the Dark

Alone here in the dark, only sounds of my beating heart

Thats when the tears shall fall,  this silent pain and

cry of sorrow, how will I make it through tomorrow.

I feel so alone I reach out to touch you, I can't see,

it's so dark, the emptiness tears my  heart.

Where are you I cry, as darkness draws near

tears soak my pillow where no one can hear. 

The silence is more than I can bare, thoughts fill

my head, as I lay here in my bed. It's cold, it's dark,

why did you have to break my heart. 

The voices inside my head are screaming, 

where are you, don't leave, all I can do is grieve.

I am afraid it's too late, there is nothing I can do

but lay here and cry for you. 

It's so cold,  and dark, why did we have to part.  

The light draws near, you say I have nothing to fear.

I must go on and act like nothing is wrong.

I go through the motions of life,

but I will be here again when it's night....

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Jacqueline Harr...

This is the first poem I have ever shared. Please give some honest feedback. I would love it and it would be so helpful. Thank you

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Hi Poetess Jacqueline Cain,

Welcome to Cosmo poetry family, Your poem is good, lovely, my applause, my five stars, I love the below lines,
 

It's so cold,  and dark, why did we have to part.  

The light draws near, you say I have nothing to fear.

I must go on and act like nothing is wrong.

I go through the motions of life,

but I will be here again when it's night...

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Steve Green

I;ve always been a sucker for narrative poetry and your heartfelt experience talked to me,,,Thanks for sharing 

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Jacqueline Harr...

Thank you. I do not really know the different types of poetry. I just write from my heart & soul. I have never taken classes or anything. Now that I am at a place with time on my hands I am interested in learning about poetry. I feel like music, poetry is up to interpretation by the reader. First off find out what the different types of poetry are... Lol. 

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Tony Taylor

Hey J!!.....I think you're right!!......you're in the right place..........this is a very accepting and interested community........not interesting (not that we're boring or anything)........but interested community of poets and authors and painters willing to help you and learn from you as well........symbiotic if you will..........your first effort here has made an impression ........keep it up.......you will find that you make many friends........simply by being yourself.......and judging by your first write here..........you'll be great........well done my friend......and......Welcome to COSMO!!..........smiles........T  xx

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Valerie Lynn

I really love your style of writing! Welcome to Cosmo!! I look forward to reading more from you! 5*s!

Val ♥️

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Devon La Porte

Good write Jacqueline i understand completely, a person with a broken heart is so alone left with darkness and despair. Congratulations on your fb promotion.

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Bahar Bakht

Beautiful.  Welcome to Cosmo and keep sharing. 

BB

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