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Can we talk

Why would you leave me
why would you go?
why talk all that love shit
but not let it show?
These are my questions 
i need to know
i need some answers from you
fully disclosed.
Come get closer to me
but keep on your clothes.
Look me in my eyes
and we’ll see where this goes.
You see I know some things
you think I don’t know.
like my mama used to say
”Baby I’m far from slow”
Why would you leave me
why disappear?
but now you left me
That was my biggest fear
-Juone

 

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al Bikaadi

Hey.... I really loved this... but the last part 

"Why would you leave me
why disappear?
but now you left me
That was my biggest fear"

really took away from it and if fell flat into cliche.... 

It you had stopped before that I would have given it 5 stars already... keep writing, look forward to more. 

Hugs
 

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