Poem -



Your love is my anesthesia 
That makes this process painless
The moments give me amnesia
To the life time I have remaining
Your presence is my pace maker
The closer we are the faster the beat
If you decide to leave on behalf of a replacer
That’ll mean no good for me 😣
I’m not the perfect patient
I’m grumpy at times and need privacy
I know I probably drive you crazy
But I honestly wouldn’t know what to do without your life with me
You hold my heart with concern and delicacy 
Your carefulness has gained all my trust
Knowing the death of me will be you missing me
So being my provider and shield is a must
As many times as I was nonchalant
Giving you shoulder shrugs
Not giving you the responses you wanted
You never once pulled the plug
You have earned my every right
And the trust to operate on me
Knowing I’ll rather just die
If I was just depending on your PhD 
Your time is my medicine 
The kind that I won’t overdose
I can’t think of a moment better than
Always having you so close
So you can see you’re my want and need
My guardian angel, my conscience 
You’re the flow through my arteries
To prevent the heart blockage
You’re my cardiologist 
That creates this spark
Giving me plenty of wattage 
To defeat this dart
If they tried to switch my doctor
There’s no one else I would take
You’re my drive, my monitor
My mate, the only thing keeping me awake.

                             The End

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Tony Taylor

VERY clever verse.......with imagery created by some even MORE clever phrasing!......ALL STARS!!..... well done!!...... and....... WELCOME to COSMO HENNESSEY!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo 👍👍✴✴👌✴👍😊

Hennessey Hill

Tony Taylor, I’m glad you like it😊thanks for reading and I’m honored!

Terry Reeves

Anyone who had a heart -
it's just a pump and makes me grump.

Arabas Perception

Nice job hill. Every heart needs a little Jesus tho. Check this out brother https://youtu.be/dbwZzwBW_AI

Hennessey Hill

Daniel thanks for reading and I’m glad you like it. Not to speak religious but I don’t believe in Jesus, only God but I’ll be sure to look at it!

Arabas Perception

How do you believe in only God? I'm curious about your religion bc according to the Bible Jesus Christ is God's perfect plan of salvation when Jesus said no man cometh to the father but by me it explains it and if you believe in God you must believe the Bible why would he write a book and tell the truth in the beginning when we talks about creating earth but then decide to lie later on to each and every man his own but we are all sinners redeemed by the blood of Christ only after receiving him as our savior and even more so how can you not believe in Jesus bc of the scripture John 3:16-17 for God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten son that whosever believeth in him should not perish but have ever lasting life for God sent not his son into the world to condemn the world but that the world through him might be saved. See in these verses it clearly says son of God. If you believe in God that means you must believe in his word and in the Bible his word it clearly states he had a son, Jesus 

Hennessey Hill


if you would like to hear my reasons then message me privately.


Dean Kuch

Congratulations on being nominated for the month of May in the poetry contest here at CosmoFunnel with this stunning and imaginative entry, Hennessey Hill.
I wish you the very best of luck.
~Dean Kuch 🏆

Hennessey Hill


Wow, I didn’t even know. Thank you for the support!