Poem -

Come with me

How could I not love you?
with your blue eyes 
and safe gaze
secrets spoken under the stars 
plans made for another rotation 
that summer haze 
while we couldn't be fazed 
our love was safe 
I gotta leave baby
wish you would come with me
 

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Dean Kuch

I have hazel eyes, Savannah, and very little use for love.
Therefore, I suppose I wouldn't qualify.
Nice write‚ÄĒemotive and expressive.
~Dean "Kuch" (pronounced as "Cook")

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Savannah Robertson

Lol I'm working on something you may like right now, but it's a song and not a poem. But there is nothing wrong with hazel eyes. Most of the people I've met with hazel eyes are memorable and good. Thank you for your comment.

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Dean Kuch

We hazel-eyed romantic fools do try our best, Savannah, lol.
You're more than welcome.
~Dean Kuch  :}

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John DeFoore Jr

Really nice poem, look forward to hearing your song.
john

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