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Crying

Crying for the poor soul who is trapped in hell and no way to get out… She is crying for help yet no one can hear her. You are trying your best to free her from the demon that has her. You have gave it your all you had to give then you had no more to give, so you give up on her… one after another giving up on her! She was used and used so she stop trying… She stopped caring... You come back to help once more yet she is hurt by others “loving” her. She is different then she was before. She is scared yet won't let that show, she is hurt from everything yet won't give up, she is scarred from her past yet won't let that stop her from trying. She is the one you loved and still do love, you promised her your heart and soul yet all she wanted was you love. So you gave it to her and then she was free and you were able to hold her and kiss her, you could call her yours. That is what set her free from the demon she was trapped by. This girl is me and you are my savior and my protector.

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Georgia Elliott

I loved your poem. Expressing your inner feelings in third person is like holding a mirror up to yourself and telling the story about the person in the reflection (you) but I get to see it all through my eyes. Beautiful

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Jas Wulf

thank you... some one i truly love gave me strength to write it.... it is all true :) 

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

This is a good prose poem. Congrats

 She is the one you loved and still do love, you promised her your heart and soul yet all she wanted was you love. So you gave it to her and then she was free and you were able to hold her and kiss her, you could call her yours. That is what set her free from the demon she was trapped by. This girl is me and you are my savior and my protector.

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI

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