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Haunting

The feeling will forever haunt meΒ 
The feeling of your breathΒ 
The feeling of being frozen
The feeling of your skin on mine
The feeling of loosing it allΒ 
The feeling of watching my life crumble

HauntingΒ 
That’s the simplest way to say
You haunt my dreams
You haunt the intimate moments that should be mine
You took that away from me, more than you even know
But somehow left me craving
Craving for someone to show me something different… 

Anything different…

Will it ever haunt you like it haunts me????

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Tony Taylor

WOW!! SAMANTHA!!....I can feel the pain in these beautifully delivered words.......the formatting of which is most unique and ideal for this piece....well done....ALL STARS!!.....and welcome to cosmo!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xoΒ Β 

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Samantha Burleson

Thank you so much! I have never publicly put my stuff anywhere so thank you for those kind words!

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Marion

Excellent first write x

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Gwendoline

Hello Samantha, this is a wonderful debut. A chilling yet perfectly expressed poem, which forces the reader to feel the pain so evidently and vividly expressed. I hope we all get to read more from you
Welcome to CosmoΒ 
GwenΒ xΒ 

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