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I Lose Self Control.

I Lose Self Control.

Throw your arms around me,
Just gaze, become my view,
Look deep within my being,
Let my thoughts captivate you.

Let me hold your cheek,
As I kiss your passionate lips,
As you caress my arms,
From shoulder to finger tips.

Then pull my hips closer,
And let seduction overrule,
My nails down your back,
As my hair you pull.

Free your inner animal,
Just take me here and now,
As we align our bodies,
And make a physical vow.

Just let me gaze once more,
And lose myself in your soul,
Every minute I’m around you,
I lose my self control.

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Tony Taylor

Dear Poet Sister LUCY!!
You have delivered a powerfully sexy, sensual, and seductive piece here...... the phrasing getting more and more intense as the it continues along a line that subtly compels the reader ~

          ~ "Throw your arms around me.."
             "Let me hold your cheek..."
             "Then pull my hips closer.."
             "Free your inner animal.." ~

It's in the phrasing's continuity that I think the strength of this piece lies..... never letting up on the perfect word choices!!.......ALL STARS!!.......I PINNED this write because of its fine craftsmanship!!..... Bravo!! ???.......Love & ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?

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Lucy Parsons

Thank you so much Tony, I’ve never really written many ‘hot’ pieces so it’s great to have the feedback. Xxxx ❤️❤️❤️❤️

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