Monster in the Mirror
I bleed the pain away
Just a small puddle on the floor
A few dark passengers
That I didn't really care for anymore
The ghost that haunt my mind
I put them in a jar
So they will be there when I need them
They're not going very far
The monster under my bed
Well that there is my chum
And anyone who would attack me in my sleep
Find out they were dumb
But the skeletons in my closet
They are a constant reminder
They have all my deep and darkest
Filed up in a binder
The worst nightmare creature
In the mirror it resides
It shows I'm a monster here
And the real me, he just hides
By LukeCoomer © #poetssociety #writersofinstagram #poet #poetry #love #poem #english #literature #story #2017 #music #instagram #phrases #quotestoliveby #quote #lovepoetry #instagood #goodmorningpost #motivation #destiny #reflection #monsters #fineontheinside #monsterontheoutside
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Hey LUKE!!!.... the darkness, the battle that rages on in the mind of your character is powerful and seems to reference a serious struggle with the voices and visions that accompany the darkest parts of depression and its consequences......... where the worst nightmare creature turns out to be you......WOW!!.........I pray this is a fiction because otherwise this is beyond controversial!!........ALL STARS!!......... compelling read ~to say the least!!.........be well brother poet!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ?☀✴✳♥
Tony
manthanks you know I love to hear from you .. thanks for taking the time out for me and your great compliments
Hello Luke, man great write... Glad you kept the pace and theme, and did not lighten it up at the end, but rather you kept it strong... Am favoring this, very well done:
Tempemendivil
i rythm in most of my works and I try to structure my lines accordingly and oh got put in the twist lol
Luke-
This was simply great, it was keeping me on the edge of my seat, and I love that!
Keep doing this, it is compelling...............WOW!
Best Wishes
Nancy