Poem -

my first haiku

my first haiku

 
 
art of the poet
is not to over blow it
readers will know it

 

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Dusk Arising

I dont like haiku or any other intrusion of arithmetic into the art which is poetry. For me poetry should be pure expression of feeling which arithmetic is not LOL... but sometimes you just have to have a go dontcha? Couldn't resist the picture. Have a great weekend.

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Being Me

I am not a fan of the Haiku either ...but I kinda like what you did here ...and yeah, the picture's cute!

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Neville

I just gone un pinned it ........................ N :)

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Dusk Arising

Thank you Neville. I'll have to try a few more haiku now ive broken the ice, but I'm in no hurry. The picture was just TOO cute not to share somewhere.

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