Poem -
MY INNER BEAUTY
A PURE IDENTITY PROTECTED WITHIN
HIS SHELL.....HIS SHIELD.....WITH BATTLES TO WIN
WITHSTANDING THE ELEMENTS OF NATURE AND MAN
MUST BURY HIS SECRETS DEEP IN THE SAND
HIS DUTY TO GUARD A TREASURE SO RARE....
A SATIN CLOAKEDÂ ORB ENCASED IN HIS LAIR
THE OYSTER SHELL...HIS LIFE SEEMS UNFAIR
ENTRUSTED WITH TRIUMPH
THIS BURDEN TO BARE
EXHAUSTED AND WITHERED HE LETS GO TO SHARE
OPENING UP HE CAN NO LONGER BARE
THE PEARL..... HIS EXISTENCE IS NO LONGER THERE
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Comments
Wow Carey well put together flows beautifully.Â
Carey Milton
Good write, but why do you use BLOCK letters ? When you use for poetry, I recommend to use small letters (Caps lock Off). Beautiful image, very appropriate.
I love the below lines. These lines shows your creativeness and visualization. My special congrats to youÂ
" MUST BURY HIS SECRETS DEEP IN THE SAND
HIS DUTY TO GUARD A TREASURE SO RARE....
A SATIN CLOAKEDÂ ORB ENCASED IN HIS LAIR
THE OYSTER SHELL...HIS LIFE SEEMS UNFAIR "
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hey Carey!
true feelings..and deep thoughts..!
A wonderful secret of inner beauty..:)
keep writing
regards and love
Surabhi Saxena
Thanks for your lovely comment xx :)
beautiful poem- angelina