Poem -
My name is berry
my name is berry,
and my moms to hairy,
and my dad is to canny,
so i buy some candy,
and find an penny,
and fell in love with Jenny,
she's very bossy,
like my possy,
witch i have none of,
so i use my imagination,
and make love with my hand,
ow how lonly i am.
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Comments
I really like this short poem! But I hope e loneliness ends for him
thank u im glad u liked it that means a lot to me XD
Dude!!.... you're freaky crazy!!.... like Hip Hop full on hazy!!....... you know what I'm sayin'!!.....there Will be no masturbatin!! ......just funnin' witch ya my bruhvah!!........this is VERY creative my friend...... couple grammatical problems......... but.........nonethelees creative as hell........ you draw that picture?...... cuz if you did......... you just found yourself a home away from home!!........ well done.........ALL STARS......... peace and hair grease!!......... out............T xo
Thanks for the support Tony I loved your comment that's amazing that someone enjoyed this piece I wrote not much people out there care to comment or to leave a nice one none the less so reading your comment made me laugh and go all out crazy also I didn't draw that my step dad did although I did draw the eyes messed up a lil but thank u a whole bunch for the support Tony that means a lot to me
I agree with Tony on this one, it`s a fun read and I think the drawing looks like Leonardo Dicaprio a bit. Well done on another good piece sweetie.
Love & hugs.......G xx
Thanks Georgina means lots to me that you enjoyed I thought you'd like it lol when I first wrote this I was all excited this was actually one of my first poems ever written to be honest