Poem -

Over the Fence

Over the Fence

Looking over the fence from where we stood

the grass looked greener, the people looked happier

they seem to be dancing

life looked good on the other side

we were missing a lot

We were green with envy

We complained and grumbled

Oh how we wish we were on the other side!

We were promised heaven on earth if we cross to the other side

We were promised a change

What kind of change, we didn’t care

We struggled

We suffered

We toiled and cheated just to be on the other side

Now we are over the fence

If only we had known!

The grass is not as green as we thought

They were mourning not dancing

We are hungrier

We are hopeless

Life is no longer easy

The change we got was a change for the worse

If only we knew

If only we had stayed on our side of the fence!

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Richard Waters

Fascinating involving write with a standpoint many can relate to.

Skillfully presented message.

Take care.  :)

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Rose Sho

Wow.....this is my first comment on CosmoFunnel and I'm overwhelmed.

Thanks so much Richard.

Hugs.

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Greg Etsell

HI Rose loved your poem. peace and love to you hugs xxoo 

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Rose Sho

Hi Greg.....thanks for loving my peom.

This means so much to me......xoxo

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Cleo Tomi Olajide

Hi Rose, lovely sad emotional write, great job. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.

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Rose Sho

Hello Cleo, thanks a million....lots of love

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Rose Sho

Hey Charlotte...Your side of the fence might be greener than the other side...Sure, it's not always rosier on the other side of the fence...I'm thrilled to know you enjoyed it...Thanks so much

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