Over the Fence

Looking over the fence from where we stood
the grass looked greener, the people looked happier
they seem to be dancing
life looked good on the other side
we were missing a lot
We were green with envy
We complained and grumbled
Oh how we wish we were on the other side!
We were promised heaven on earth if we cross to the other side
We were promised a change
What kind of change, we didn’t care
We struggled
We suffered
We toiled and cheated just to be on the other side
Now we are over the fence
If only we had known!
The grass is not as green as we thought
They were mourning not dancing
We are hungrier
We are hopeless
Life is no longer easy
The change we got was a change for the worse
If only we knew
If only we had stayed on our side of the fence!
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HI Rose loved your poem. peace and love to you hugs xxooÂ
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This means so much to me......xoxo
Hi Rose, lovely sad emotional write, great job. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
Hello Cleo, thanks a million....lots of love
Hey Charlotte...Your side of the fence might be greener than the other side...Sure, it's not always rosier on the other side of the fence...I'm thrilled to know you enjoyed it...Thanks so much