Imogen!  Excellent write!  I "see" this most clearly as to so eloquently visualize a drawing of tigers roaring their yellow stripes staining the black page as they claw their movement in red.  A short but impacting write…excellent descriptive imagery!  5 stars from me!
Thank you so much, Valerie. I'm extremely new to this site and its wonderful to get good feedback so early- pumps me up for my next poem! I'm so glad you could visualise it... I'm trying to work on my descriptive techniques.
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Imogen!  Excellent write!  I "see" this most clearly as to so eloquently visualize a drawing of tigers roaring their yellow stripes staining the black page as they claw their movement in red.  A short but impacting write…excellent descriptive imagery!  5 stars from me!
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Thank you so much, Valerie. I'm extremely new to this site and its wonderful to get good feedback so early- pumps me up for my next poem! I'm so glad you could visualise it... I'm trying to work on my descriptive techniques.
Thanks again,
Imogen.Â