Poem -
Persuasion
In steamy solitude
Of lusty sex
Brushing up against
My tender skin
Titillating, tantalizing
Teasing⦠tempting
Intensifying desire
My sigh forms a kiss
That dawdlesΒ Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β
Until my lips pout
Emitting a moan
Of surrender
Slippery, I slide
Burning breasts prick
Bristly chest
Pertly sensitive
Tingles then spread
To trembling thighs
Wrapping sublime
Lustily I move
Silenced by a kiss
Surrendering,
Alabaster to night
Rapturous ride
Pushes and pulls
All thought away
Save thisβ¦..
I want you... surrender
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Comments
loved this, very elegantly written amorous but not smutty loved it.
cheers jeff
Good morning Jeff. Thank you so much. I'm always worried about going too far. So glad I didn't :) Have a great weekend. Β Rebecca
a very sexy write Rebecca....oozing romance and desire....this goes to show how versatile you are...enjoyed it...Lots of love...Rose
Hello Rose. That really means a lot to me thank you. It's fun to try different things and see how far I can go with my writing. Thanks so much hon. Β Rebecca
beautiful sexy write Rebecca
Thank you Lisa :) Glad you enjoyed this.Β
This is so good REBECCA!!...... some of the phrases just blew me away...... like... "Slippery, I slide.."...... never heard that before but it sounds like I should have (know what I mean?).... just awesome phrases that titillate but are so wide open to interpretation that it just sucks you in.... and there lines like that all the way through......VERY sexy stuff girlfriend!!.... wow!......ALL STARS!!..... Love it!!....... high fives sister girl.... keep 'em comin'!!....... smiles......T xo. ?
lol... Tony that was funny.Β
Hi and thank you. I like doing erotica because it is very focused in it's intent. There is really no guess work, but the use of metaphor.... stimulating :) Glad you enjoyed this and thanks for the stars. Hugs hon, Rebecca
Hi Sweet Rebecca,
Wow, Rebecca, you have transposed the culmination of desire, and the ultimate arrival of its participation. Β Into these beautiful orgasmic words, shuddering in climax, who has taken whom?
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Hello Larry :) thank you for these nice words. I'm glad you found this stimulating. These writes are fun. I love the freedom to work in metaphor and like to challenge myself. Keep smiling hon, Hugs, Rebecca
great work here, Rebecca,
erotica is perhaps the toughest genre to produce really excellent poetry, you can so easily lose focus and become too graphic and descriptive and lose the reader, I find this interesting and sensual with good movement plot and resolution; it reads legit, good poetic form, enjoyed...tribute
Thank you Christopher. At one time, there was much debate in my writers circle about how much was too much. I'm a bit subdued to some, but it's my style. :) Glad you enjoyed and thank you for stopping in. Hugs Rebecca