Poem -
poison tears
Rain, rain, go away,
Because of you the pain will stay.
Slit my throat, cut out my heart,
Leave me here, tear it apart.
Poison tears stream down my face,
My heart beats at a steady pace
As I try to stand again;
Alone and standing in the rain.
I don't need you anymore...
Is what I think while tears pour.
I hate you like I hate my life;
But love is what cuts like a knife.
Love is death and death is you;
Its pain stains like a black tattoo.
Those memories come back again
And bind me in the ropes of pain.
Crimson blood streams down my head
Like a long, silk ribbon, tied by a thread,
To a platinum bullet, a hole in my skull...
...Now just a memory that's faded and dull.
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WOW awesome. !!
Good day, Dameon! This is a strong piece about pain and loss, I love the imagery and the phrasing is dark, but beautiful. "Love is death and death is you; Its pain stains like a black tattoo." The last stanza is amazing, "Like a long, silk ribbon, tied by a thread, To a platinum bullet, a hole in my skull...Now just a memory that's faded and dull." Thank you for sharing! Susan
Well thank you for commenting not many true poets do that much anymore to be honest most skip through until they find a noobie and ask them to read there poem lol so I appriciate that you are spending your time to read this it means a lot to me and yes I spent a good time coming up with that line at first I was going to put something else than tattoo but couldn't come up with another analysts or cinclusion so I went with that anyhow Thank you a lotĀ
-Giving up doesnt always mean ur weak. sometimes it just means your strong enough to let go.Ā
~ a wise man
Hi Dameon,
I thought I`d start today off with reading your work and this is the first on your list. All I could say whilst reading it was WOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really, really am impressed with this piece. You express your pain so clearly and very beautifully sweetie and I`m extremely proud of you, just as if you were my own son, there`s space in my heart if you want it sweetie, it would be an honour to be your adopted mum. You have wonderful talent and don`t ever let anyone tell you otherwise because they would only be jealous of what you are capable of. I have read all of your profile and I`m so sorry and angry that you were treated so badly and I understand totally what you have been through as I was once a victim of bullying too, I`m so proud of you that you have come through it all beautifully and have found your strength and your wings and are now sawing high like a beautiful Eagle. You are an amazing young man and one day you will look back on your life and you will see that for yourself. You are a very talented writer and poet and a great asset to the Cosmo Family sweetie. I`m sure that you have found that writing and poetry are very cathartic and a superb way of getting your feelings and troubles down into some sort of order that helps you sort your mind and that way you will find peace. I love you dearly kiddo, keep on writing because I`m your number one fan and I`m proud of it.
Lots of big tight hugs and kisses
Mum G xx
Wow I'm speechless Georgina iv never had anyone said such kind words ever I mean I'm honored to be considered as a son it's my pleasure personaly my mother at this time will have nothing to do with me having you say such things brings joyful tears to my eyes and makes me smile I feel extraordinarily loved thank you a whole lot and I myself has grown confident quite a bit I know I can do so many great things I guess time to time things others people say get to me and I believe them and iv been to the hospital or mental hospital a few times for certain attempts I won't get into all that but hearing that someone out there someone special cares and spent the time to actually hear my story, thank you a whole lot is all I can say. I have nothing else to say, I'm left speechless. Thanks for the support and all the incouraging kind words you have no idea how much you've helped me in most uninhibited of times you've helped me get inspiration to write many things and to keep striding toward goals and I thank. You fir that.Ā
Love ya lots mum G.
catch ya on the flip side of things!
and I wish ya the best!