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RESCUE ME!

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Carey Milton
RESCUE ME!

R ely on no one but myself

E xcuses made to suit yourself

S ad and solitary I remain

C ure my aura, ease this pain

U nable to accept, this drives me mad

E pitomized love...we once had

M ayday baby....Rescue me!

E verlasting hunger....my eternity....

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Total votes: 5
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Hurting Lonely Loss Rescue
Poetry Genre: 
Limerick Tragedy Drama
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BLOSSOM

A lovely write Carey, and so cleverly written!  A vote from me :)

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Carey Milton

Cheers Rachel for taking time to read :) thx for the vote :D

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Gordon Manhatten

I always love when the poet does something cool with the layout/structure of the poem, great job!

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Michael Villamarin's pictureMichael Villamarin7511 years ago
Gordon Manhatten's pictureGordon Manhatten10011 years ago
Andrew Swanson's pictureAndrew Swanson10011 years ago
BLOSSOM's pictureBLOSSOM7511 years ago

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