Poem - 28 January 2017, 16:43 Served Cold Lorna Serving cold upon a platter, Almost froze, what does it matter? Deserving this icy bitter Shant be adding Β this to twitter Coming around it does go Must let go of this frosty snow Like 3 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 2080 Rating: Total votes: 3 Tags: Humour Release Revenge Poetry Genre: Melodrama Tragicomedy Topic: Humour Listed in: Contest Entries 6 comments
Jason Brown28 January 2017, 16:57 Shant be adding this to twitter LOVE that line!! Is it possibly because you learned your lesson the first time?!? Hahaha!!!! The imagery and the bite of the shorter lines really work too. Excellent!! J xxx Reply
Lorna28 January 2017, 17:03 Haha, not me, but I have noticedΒ many people get shot with s*&t whenever they seek revenge on social media x Reply
The Bee30 January 2017, 13:54 Yeah L, "Must let go of this frosty snow" it will only freeze the heart, look to the sky (with eyes closed)and feel the warmth of the sun, the cold will no longer matter xox :-) Reply
βππΌππΌπππ»πΈβπππ30 January 2017, 16:08 brilliant write Lorna! Reply
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LOVE that line!! Is it possibly because you learned your lesson the first time?!? Hahaha!!!!
The imagery and the bite of the shorter lines really work too.
Excellent!!
J xxx
Haha, not me, but I have noticedΒ many people get shot with s*&t whenever they seek revenge on social media x
Yeah L, "Must let go of this frosty snow" it will only freeze the heart, look to the sky (with eyes closed)and feel the warmth of the sun, the cold will no longer matter xox :-)
Thank you Bee, I'm glad you liked it :)
brilliant write Lorna!
thanks again :) xx