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Served Cold

Served Cold

Serving cold upon a platter,

Almost froze, what does it matter?

Deserving this icy bitter

Shant be adding Β this to twitter

Coming around it does go

Must let go of this frosty snow

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Jason Brown

Shant be adding this to twitter

LOVE that line!! Is it possibly because you learned your lesson the first time?!? Hahaha!!!!

The imagery and the bite of the shorter lines really work too.

Excellent!!

J xxx

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Lorna

Haha, not me, but I have noticedΒ many people get shot with s*&t whenever they seek revenge on social media x

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The Bee

Yeah L, "Must let go of this frosty snow" it will only freeze the heart, look to the sky (with eyes closed)and feel the warmth of the sun, the cold will no longer matter xox :-)

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Lorna

Thank you Bee, I'm glad you liked it :)

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Lorna

thanks again :) xx

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