Poem -
Six Stations
Station One: You are forever in my heart
Station Two: A love for all who cross my path
Station Three: A compassion to conquer all bad times
Station Four: A desire to laugh in the face of pain
Station Five: A Joy of Everything I see and Feel
Station Six: My Commitment to live my life and shelter others
I see a canvas of a start...I will change a picture thats never been drawn.............my hope.
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Your style of poetry is fresh, easily understood and from the heart...this one is extremely well done as well, you captured a visual without actually describing one; just in the construction of the six stations it evokes a sense of movement, progression and order; not easy to do...a really good poem, full of charm and a positive spirit, pleasure to read...cheers
Like you I have just discovered your work and immensely enjoyed each write. So exciting when I find a fellow poet who I relate to so well.
Thank you for your feedback it makes my efforts worthwhile if people hear my messages of hope
Hey Jane!!.......I LOVE the final line of this piece........I think you've captured something special here.........and LIKE Chris I agree with the movement of the Stations...........well done my friend.!!.........smiles..........TÂ xx