Take Time for Rhyme
Is rhymed poetry truly dead
as some have hinted or have said?
If so, Iâm doomed, for in my head
thereâs no free verse, just rhyme instead.
Donât poets still read Robert Frost;
do Poeâs tales of woe portray the cost
of sanity, when all is lost?
Arenât Lady Libertyâs âtempest-tost"?
Emily Dickinson, W.B. Yeats,
William Shakespeare, poet John Keats.
Bards renowned for their poetic feats,
and all used rhymeâwell...isnât that sweet?
Freestyle poetry is fine, for some.
but writing in rhyme is far from dumb.
In fact, my personal rule of thumb
is to rhyme with flair and great aplomb.
Itâs been said that we who rhyme are nuts
rhyming's passĂ©, it wonât make the cuts.
But learning to rhyme takes skill and guts.
Whatever you write steer clear of ruts.
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âYour huddled masses yearning to breathe free,
 The wretched refuse of your teeming shore.
 Send these, the homeless, tempest-tost to me,
 I lift my lamp beside the golden door!â
From Emma Lazarusâ poem, The New Colossus, engraved on the brass plate adorning the base of our Statue of Liberty.
You can read the poem in its entirety below.
You know, for inspiration?
Like 7 Pin it 2The New Colossus
Not like the brazen giant of Greek fame,
With conquering limbs astride from land to land;
Here at our sea-washed, sunset gates shall stand
A mighty woman with a torch, whose flame
Is the imprisoned lightning, and her name
Mother of Exiles. From her beacon-hand
Glows world-wide welcome; her mild eyes command
The air-bridged harbor that twin cities frame.
"Keep, ancient lands, your storied pomp!" cries she
With silent lips. "Give me your tired, your poor,
Your huddled masses yearning to breathe free,
The wretched refuse of your teeming shore.
Send these, the homeless, tempest-tost to me,
I lift my lamp beside the golden door!"Emma Lazarus
November 2, 1883
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Comments
:) Truly significant craft shows why rhyme isn't daft !!
All the best to you and yours.
I like rhyme
and can be hidden,
and that
is fine...
Thanks...
I love rhyme, love this...keep up the rhyming :)
Thanks very much for stopping by to read and comment, David.
I do appreciate it.
~Dean :)
I love it <3 plus i love rhyming ;)Â
I promise, I didn't mean to ignore your thoughtful comment, Whispering Dream.
As a relatively "newbie" to CosmoFunnel mysel, I am still trying to learn how everything works here on this site.
I just wanted you to know that while my reply is a bit late in coming, it in no way means I don't appreciate your thoughts.
I doâŁïž
Much love, dear poet...
~Dean â„â«âȘ?â«âȘâ„
I loved your poem, as someone who only ever uses rhyme it was refreshing.
I'm quite new to poetry and learned about it with rhyme, it is quite challenging at times
to keep a story within a rhyme with a beginning middle and end - but very satisfying when you achieve it.
John
Obviously I'm very partial to rhymed poetry as well, John.
It's not that I detest freestyle or free verse poetry, not in the least.
I've even written a few in my day and with much success.
But my heart lies with those bards of oldâPoe, Frost, Dickinson and Carroll. William Service is also another poet's work whom I admire very much.
That being said, it's more of a challenge for me to rhyme than it is to string a bunch of eloquent words together and label it "free verse".
But, that's just me and my personal preference.
Thanks so much again for reading my work.
It is appreciated.
~Dean âŒâ„âŸ
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