Temporary Fix

The cookie is crisp, utter magic to the tongue
chocolate screaming aloud before a bite has begun.
The caramel is delicious, there's really no doubt...
it would be more ideal with the calories stripped out!
Each bite would bring forth a taste bud explosion,
while also inspiring the waistline's erosion.
Think of the jeans buried deep in the closet -
temptation in fast forward with no desire to pause it.
Indulging would bring such fleeting satisfaction,
but logic's now trumped by this wicked distraction.
Is this wrapped up bliss really a need?
Consumption becomes a regretted misdeed.
Avert your eyes from the short-term prize,
and deafen your ears to the sweet tooth's cries;
resist the urge to down that Twix...
after all, it's just a temporary fix.
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Comments
I love this anecdotal and observational type of writing, and its so true!
Liked starred and pinned ,well done.
John
Thanks, John! Â Through conversation, my hubby actually offered the title and he said I should write something more light this time (could have gone the affair route with the same title). :) Â Appreciate the feedback! Â Blessings!*!*!
Jacki
Original deliciously presented piece is a fine write from your pen, as usual !
You bring the reader into your poetry with sumptuous ease !
Great phrasing in a well thought out analysis.
Warmest wishes as always ! Â :)
x
Awww, thanks Richard!! Â Good to hear from you. Â Appreciate very much the kind comments (always do)! Â Had fun with this one... Â If only I could ignore the sweet youth's cries - ha!
Blessings!*!*!
Jacki
:) Take care.
Hi Jacki,
This is the "sweetest" poem that I have ever ingested.
Although, it does weigh heavily on me.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Love the puns, Larry! Â Brings out Snickers from me...
You would fit well in our house as my hubby and I love doing that, too!
Thanks for the comment!*!*!
Jacki