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Temporary Fix

Temporary Fix

The cookie is crisp, utter magic to the tongue
chocolate screaming aloud before a bite has begun.
The caramel is delicious, there's really no doubt...
it would be more ideal with the calories stripped out!
Each bite would bring forth a taste bud explosion,
while also inspiring the waistline's erosion.
Think of the jeans buried deep in the closet -
temptation in fast forward with no desire to pause it.
Indulging would bring such fleeting satisfaction,
but logic's now trumped by this wicked distraction.
Is this wrapped up bliss really a need?
Consumption becomes a regretted misdeed.
Avert your eyes from the short-term prize,
and deafen your ears to the sweet tooth's cries;
resist the urge to down that Twix...
after all, it's just a temporary fix.
 

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John Astley

I love this anecdotal and observational type of writing, and its so true!

Liked starred and pinned ,well done.

John

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Jacki Goebel

Thanks, John!  Through conversation, my hubby actually offered the title and he said I should write something more light this time (could have gone the affair route with the same title). :)  Appreciate the feedback!  Blessings!*!*!

Jacki

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Richard Waters

Original deliciously presented piece is a fine write from your pen, as usual !

You bring the reader into your poetry with sumptuous ease !

Great phrasing in a well thought out analysis.

Warmest wishes as always !  :)

x

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Jacki Goebel

Awww, thanks Richard!!  Good to hear from you.  Appreciate very much the kind comments (always do)!  Had fun with this one...  If only I could ignore the sweet youth's cries - ha!

Blessings!*!*!

Jacki

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Larry Ran

Hi Jacki,

This is the "sweetest" poem that I have ever ingested.

Although, it does weigh heavily on me.

Peace and Love,

Larry xxx

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Jacki Goebel

Love the puns, Larry!  Brings out Snickers from me...

You would fit well in our house as my hubby and I love doing that, too!

Thanks for the comment!*!*!

Jacki

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