Temporary Fix

The cookie is crisp, utter magic to the tongue
chocolate screaming aloud before a bite has begun.
The caramel is delicious, there's really no doubt...
it would be more ideal with the calories stripped out!
Each bite would bring forth a taste bud explosion,
while also inspiring the waistline's erosion.
Think of the jeans buried deep in the closet -
temptation in fast forward with no desire to pause it.
Indulging would bring such fleeting satisfaction,
but logic's now trumped by this wicked distraction.
Is this wrapped up bliss really a need?
Consumption becomes a regretted misdeed.
Avert your eyes from the short-term prize,
and deafen your ears to the sweet tooth's cries;
resist the urge to down that Twix...
after all, it's just a temporary fix.

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Comments
I love this anecdotal and observational type of writing, and its so true!
Liked starred and pinned ,well done.
John
Thanks, John! Through conversation, my hubby actually offered the title and he said I should write something more light this time (could have gone the affair route with the same title). :) Appreciate the feedback! Blessings!*!*!
Jacki
Original deliciously presented piece is a fine write from your pen, as usual !
You bring the reader into your poetry with sumptuous ease !
Great phrasing in a well thought out analysis.
Warmest wishes as always ! :)
x
Awww, thanks Richard!! Good to hear from you. Appreciate very much the kind comments (always do)! Had fun with this one... If only I could ignore the sweet youth's cries - ha!
Blessings!*!*!
Jacki
:) Take care.
Hi Jacki,
This is the "sweetest" poem that I have ever ingested.
Although, it does weigh heavily on me.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Love the puns, Larry! Brings out Snickers from me...
You would fit well in our house as my hubby and I love doing that, too!
Thanks for the comment!*!*!
Jacki