The Devouring Forest

When I was young I got lost in a forest
I was supposed to go east but instead went west Â
My sense of location isn’t exactly the bestÂ
Once I entered the woods I felt stressedÂ
For the very entrance had regressedÂ
I soon realized this forest was possessedÂ
it’s sole purpose to ingestÂ
and make kids like me depressedÂ
If I knew, when I began my questÂ
just how long and painful it would beÂ
I would’ve lied down to restÂ
Luckily, I don’t have the ability to foreseeÂ
One giant organism without teeth
the devouring forest hungers for meatÂ
But kids who enter are usually too sweetÂ
Unless unsweetened, they’re not fit to eatÂ
One giant organism without a heartÂ
the devouring forest uses its organsÂ
to tear sweet kids apartÂ
Now unsweetened, and fit to eatÂ
Air suffocating me with fliesÂ
Winds moaning dreary sighs Â
Butterflies blinding my eyesÂ
Tarantulas building webs of demiseÂ
Crows screaming lies
Branches clawing at my thighsÂ
Dark clouds crying liceÂ
Gusts of death freezing my lips to ice
Oaks acting as wooden spiesÂ
At all costs, hide the prizeÂ
Make sure the kid criesÂ
now we wait until she dies
Once inside there’s no way outÂ
The devouring forest had me convinced
Drained of all mightÂ
I stopped to fightÂ
and would’ve given up
If it weren’t for that faint light
A white dot in a sea of black
It reminded me of a way backÂ
While faint, I could hear a voiceÂ
blocking out the horrible noiseÂ
Another living human, rejoice!
I had only seen dead girls and boysÂ
As I advanced deeper,Â
the light grew strongerÂ
Alms tried to block my pathÂ
as mice chanted:Â
Bloodbath! Bloodbath! Bloodbath!
Bruised, slashed and covered in scars
I could start to make out the sound of cars
and catch a glimpse of the stars
Finally, light touched my skinÂ
Did I finally win?
In the midst of white I make out a figure
an Angel that heard me conjure?
Crouched in a corner, white and smallÂ
Each eye a blue crystal ball
A smile so bright prevented my fall
You found me, it smiled
a voice of a childÂ
You finally heard my call

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WOW!! SAD GIRL!!......this is a truly creative and VERY unique poetic creation!!.......from the unusual rhyme scheme to its amazingly well conveyed story line......you have the reader in the palm of your hand with this VERY well crafted poetic narrative!!.......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!......well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!....well done!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Thank you Tony! I’m glad you enjoyed this piece, and I really appreciate your kind feedback! :)