The Rain & I

Sitting at the park a troubled soul,
I looked up the sky and a friendly sun smiled at me
oh! how I enjoyed the melodious songs the birds sang
they were soothing !
suddenly, the friendly sun appeared to have gone on vacation
as dark clouds showed their ugly faces
the trees danced, swaying their branches to the music of the wind
the thunder clapped angrily
and the sky appeared to be weeping!
I joined the sky in her sorrows
as tears mingled with the rain
The rain washed the dirt on my skin
Oh! I wish it would wash beyond my skin
and wash my troubled soul!
After a while, the friendly sun appeared grinning from ear to ear
I was drenched by the rain
but still  a troubled soul!

Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
Hi My Sweet Rose,
The rains that inundate us, can never wash away the pain in our soul. Never trust the sun, for basking in its warmth, it can instantly bring the darkened clouds of deep depression. We all need that waterproof umbrella that is the protector of our soul.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Hi Larry,
Thanks a lot for your words of wisdom and for taking out time to read and comment. I've drawn inspiration from you.
Lots of love.….xox
Hi Rose, loved this poem set the scene in my mind such imagery portrayed
thanks jeffÂ
Hi Jeff, thanks a million for reading and commenting. This means so much to me.
Lots of love
Wow!!...I love every word of your comment...You nailed it!....That was exactly my thought when I wrote this...It's rewarding to find someone who can totally discern what one have written...Thank you very much Charlotte