Poem -
Things I see
Tree, bent at the trunk
From weight of it's top,
Goes up,, brushes leafs
With sky on the side
Of the road.
Sun through the
Windshield of a used car
Throws shadow
Of the stearing wheel
On the seat behind it.
Noon sets and it's
Just a black window.
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Comments
Hello RORY!!......a well painted, poetic, look into
what your eyes perceive in the moment!!....ALL STARS!!
well done dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!....T xo
Hello Rory...
Welcome to Cosmo!
I agree with Tony...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing what you were seeing...
sparrowsong
Pretty well written. Paints a distorted picture. Thank you for sharing.
Never thought of it that way, Davis. I like it, my visuals as a sort of undulant dreamy secondness to realty, as if someone taken too big a hit of some far out recreational.
Well I enjoyed reading it
A strange write( in a good way) that appeals to my strange mind...fascinating x