Poem -

Unloved

Unloved

She is not me
That is fine with you
So intent on each other
I escape your view
Abandoned
Ignored
Rejected
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My feelings forgotten
You don't give a damn
For one brief moment
I was special to you
Now tossed
Excommunicated
Excluded from view
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This is not okay
It hurts like hell
I want to stand tall
Feel secure in myself
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But something is wrong
I feel swept under the rug
Abandoned
Ignored
Rejected
UNLOVED

Β RRG Β© 10.5.18

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RRG (Rebecca)

Thank you Lisa. Strangely, the sun is shining for the first time in days and I wake with this in my head. Ironic huh. lol For everything there is a time and place. Hugs and Blessings dear poet. Rebecca

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Shorty Green

Amazingly strong poem hun I really like it x

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RedtheCreator

I really love the depth of this piece, The connection is there within the first line. Absolutely amazing!

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Tina

Love this. Its so well wriyten and I can relate.

Tina x

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RRG (Rebecca)

Thank you Tina. Sadly this is a universal human experience. Blessings and hugs, Rebecca
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poetryfan

Great poem with lots of feelingπŸ€—

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RRG (Rebecca)

Thank you Fan. A pleasure to have you stop in. Blessings, Rebecca

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