Poem -
Worth
Each action has a consequence, we say
So, should we have a little self control?
Now then, would each enterprise be delayed?
The ultimate fallout somehow unfolds
An importance, a moment seems but lost
Strange thoughts intruding, optimal refrain.
Frozen time - fueled with undiluted cost
of never ending circles: round again.
Climb high, to achieve smallest gold medal
Swing further down, feel pressured winds blowing
Keep on moving, spin faster those pedals,
Perspiration beads, rosy cheeks glowing.
Or did consequence cause the reaction?
Fueling beast, for a damn good retraction.
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Comments
Now, this is a thought provoking one. It does feel sometimes that everything is on repeat, you only have too look at any class of kids in any given era... bet you'll same bullies, same shy kids, same people pleasers and so on...all in different body's yes, but there is a pattern. I don't know if we really have choice, it appears we have a choice but maybe any choice we make is pre designed to be the right one anyway?
Who knows. I have got to an age where I think none of it matters anyway, all the struggle, achievements, dissapoinments?
The gruelling repeat of it all...we die ultimately and leave it all behind anyway.
In billions of years our sun will die, taking the earth with it...it will be as if man had never ever existed at all. Warning!!! Please don't read after the first line it will depress you 🙃🙂🤩 X
Hahaha....I continued reading ahhhhhhhhhh....but yes we keep going and doing and going and doing and repeating, but to just stop for a little moment....everything keeps going even when you don't...
thanks Marion I'm glad you found this thought provoking,
lorna xx
really cool sonnet Lorna! .........................................................................Jim
Thanks Jim, I really appreciate that
lorna x
It is an absolute honour to be the third person so far (I am not a robot) to pin this little gem .. it is worthy of many more x
Thank you Neville,
that's very kind you you to say
I really appreciate you taking the time to read this one
lorna xx
to quote L'Oreal .. Becuz ya wurf it .. x
Haha Haha...indeed
as are you
:)
Xx
Really nice. Great writing ✍️
JP
Thanks John, I appreciate your kind words
lorna :)
Excellent ...all Smiles....
Peace
Hi Lorris,
thanks for your kind words
lorna x
So glad to have found this one Lorna and please forgive my lateness here.
A real rinse, wash repeat of a poem in today's modern climate.
The hamster on the wheel making the same old revolutions and repeating the same old mistakes.
Like an offset weighing scale and one is trying to find a balance.
A delicate act.
Just like life and its myriads thrown at you, forever learning and dare say, forever losing.
C'est la vie.
Superb sonnet writing yet again and full honours to you my friend :) x.
Hi Shaun, im glad you like this one. It is difficult to find balance especially when you are in over thinking mode 24/ 7
thank you for you kind comments
Much appreciated
Lorna x