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You deserve better

Take my hand come walk with me I want to show you a different situation. ...
One where you are equal not a servant or object of someone else's obsession. ..
Feel free too walk side by side never two steps behind in some cases you lead and I'll follow. ...
Allow me to get that door for you, let me get your chair, You're not use to this I know. ....
Tell me why you allow yourself to be treated like second class when all along you've been born a queen. .
Why you allow him to disrespect you and believe his lies all because you don't want to make a scene. ..
All the phone calls and booty calls, the text messages he gets. ..
The excuses he gives why he can't be faithful and all the indescretions you seem to forget......
To be truly respected and cherished is something you may never get to experience. ....
As long as you continue to put up with mess and continue to ignore everything else. .....
You're an unprocessed diamond uncut, unfinished, a rare treasure a wonderful find. ...
An amazing woman who's unlucky in being with a man who's so unkind. ....
You deserve to be treated with the utmost respect like the princess your parents created. ...
To become someone's queen their better half their treasure never intimidated. ....
All the nights you've cried and asked God why you should have been looking in the mirror. ....
The answers you seek are not that far hidden they're locked away deep within. ....
Enough is enough stand up and recognize the woman you were born too be. ....
Move on with your life cut ties and strive to be all that you can be. ....
Now allow me to get that door one more time now you realize the way you should be treated. ...
One more thing, let that man know that he is dismissed, you've been rejuvenated and he's dismissed

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Jimmy Arnold

Stephen,

Well written poem and many emotions of self worth and preservation to be rendered to the female character,attached in it by the male character and the choice of acceptance, appears to be hers, whether she will be receptive it seems..No pressure attach, just a suggestive, proposition by the.male...Good write..

Job well done,

Jim

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Stephen Hosendove

Thanks Jim I tried to express from a third person situation, through the eyes of a man. .... some woman will read this and Look at her situation in a new perspective. ... thanks for the positive feedback I appreciate it

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Jimmy Arnold

Anytime Stephen and conveyed extremely well, loud and clear. Many may say, as clear as clear can get and i be, one of those(many)....Again job well done and a positive option and advice clear for the taking.....  

Jim

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