Your Fate Awaits You
Manipulative bastard soul, if you posses one
The lives you've tainted, those kinds of sin, can't be undone
You think you're off the hook, no one can touch you
But you can't escape this, your fate awaits you
Enjoy whatever peace you might have left
Satan is calling you out, you remain in his debt
It's a game of hide and seek
He has grown out of childish games, wipe those hypocritical tears off your cheek
I thought you were invincible? And now you're scared
You should be, you will burn, your flesh, will rip and tear
Good riddance asshole, you thought you knew evil
You know nothing, but let me introduce you to my friend, The Devil
Go with God, haha,,,, that's no longer a choice for you
Payback is a bitch, and you are long over due
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Wow Amber!!........ don't think I'd like to get on your bad side!!(lol!)....... it feels like you wrote this without stopping to re-write or edit because of the misspells etc........... but what's so groovy is that you can see the talent you have for writing because of the natural flow you have for thinking beyond your pen or keyboard........... the continuity is great because you control your reader........ and you don't let them down in your closing lines......... the mark of a good writer is all over this........ well done my cyber-friend!!.......... high-fives!!.........T xo
Tony, I didn't notice all the spelling goofs lol. I did write it quickly, as I do with most of my poetry, I don't like to over think things, which probably why I have developed that habit. Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it
Hey Amber!!..... one of the best pieces of poetic advice I ever got was from my English Lit. Professor........ it's a quote ~. "Writing, IS, re-writing!".......... all of my published stuff came from pieces that I came back to months after the original...... because like you said ~ when you're in the act of writing from inspiration..... it's a mistake to "over think things"............ that's how you keep it golden........ but when you come back and polish......... the gold shines brighter!!......... just a thought!........... your cyber-friend and admirer!!.........T xo
I did so thanks Tony
Hey amber a very cool write loved the last 6 lines great flow throughout . Cheers to you rock