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Dangerous desire

Dangerous desire

There’s nothing more magical 
Than fantasy 
Steering the wheel of your imagination 
Stretching the limits of ideology 
It’s all in your head so it’s perfect 
There’s nothing more magical 
Than a day dream 
In your wonderland 
Where butterflies talk and  cats can smile 

There’s nothing more dangerous than desire 
Cause when you wake up, all that you hoped for was nothing more than fuel to spread the fire 
 

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Tony Taylor

Hey RAQUEL!!..... drifting off into the world of fantasy can be truly magical and inspirational...... If it wasn't for the imagination EINSTEIN would never have come with "E=Mc2"...which changed the whole world!!...... but using mind altering substances can be dangerous while being beneficial at the same time....... you're playing with your life (for real) when you're playing in the ether!! Einstein dabbled with drugs for the same reason that you're insinuating here...... He handled it logically!!......I hope that I'm on track here..... you used "abuse" and "addiction" in your tag words so I assumed that this was the right response...... If I'm wrong please let me know...... regardless, you show a talent for using words and conveying imagery and intent VERY well!!......ALL STARS!!...... well done dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✴❤

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Raquel Sanchez

Wow thank you so much for the love ❤️?. And that’s a very interesting thing you braught up about Einstein. I just learnt something new so thanks for that. And I’m not going to reveal the deeper meanings of the poem, I’ll leave that up for ineperation but I can say despite the stigma drugs have within society I wouldn’t say any users should be ashamed and looked down upon. Like Einstein famous musicians like Lennon and the Beatles, Anthony kiedis meddled with mind altering substances and managed to create master pieces by you could say: stepping out of reality and viewing life in a different angle. I’m not saying drugs are great but without it the world could be a dull place. Reality can be so boring. I don’t know where I’m going with this. But thanks a lot have a nice day ??

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