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Fire

Fire

If I could steal the ears of a thousand listeners 
pour my words in their brains like poison 
yet not aim to intoxicate
but inspire and motivate 
imagine I had an influence 
my presence created a stir in the audience 
instead of passing by un noticed,
my ideas sparked and ignited
if only flames grew as I bewitched minds
forest fires in the consciousness of human kind 
 

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The fish of the sea

Such an Amazing write, so very clever but simple. I was blown away by the photo aswell! If this was your own, such an amazing capture. Deserves a post in art is what I think.... kind regards. The Fish of the Sea 

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Raquel Sanchez

Thanks fish of the sea, I love your name. You should check out my first poem for a lovely surprise. I think you’ll find a funny coincidence 

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The fish of the sea

Haha just read it! Left a comment there too! Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea~

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Yiyan Han

Wish you could ignite fires in the consciousness of human kind! Nicely done.

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Marion

Thought provoking write Raquel. Most of us spend our moment in this life unnoticed, unheard and maybe that is exactly as it should be. It allows those of truly great spirit to lead and be heard, make a mark in this life...Mandela, Martin Luther King etc....hugs ?
 

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Raquel Sanchez

Yes most of us really don’t have much to say anyway. Lots of people (like me) don’t even have a cause or a reason to create a ripple in the tide. We all just lie around in our Mediocre comfort. So I’m glad their are ppl like MLK and what not. Sad to be mediocre though. I accept hug.

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