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Comical Expressions (phase 1 contest )

Comical Expressions (phase 1 contest )

So my folks
they say
this generation is vulgar
"our days wasn't like that"
I found this and said
oh really ?                                                                                                                                                                                      
                                                                                                                                                                                    

So lets do a little comedy , this is a ROFL contest by Dblankportrait and myself , 
yes y'all the Dblankportrait  
we are looking to pick out the ten best comebacks  five each to any of your favorite 
80s song .

Above is an example I did , we asking that you limit your words to 30 or less.

"Feedback on others will be considered a crucial part of the rating
the more comments left on your piece the better.
votes can be submitted via PMs to each of the judges ."

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zZzleepy

Count me in! So I can do five?? Oh gosh...who to roast, who to roast...there's just so many, I'd hate to pick favourites...
hahahahaha

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zZzleepy

for the lols...lol
https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/comical-expressions-kiss-153822

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sarah harry

lol hi...love the energy ☺
thanks for joining us

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T Starbuck

Chuckling (inanely)...I'm in  :)
https://cosmofunnel.com/poems/comical-expressions-eileen-153821

 

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sarah harry

hi guys  

ROFL simply means - rolling on the floor laughing
there aren't many rules

we're asking you :

-to pick a 80's song of your choice and attach a short comical comment .

-now since we are all into poetry we encourage that you get creative in no more than 30 words 

salt n pepa song was my example to you (true story btw lol)

this little contest is simply to lighten the mood make someone smile 

go on, you can do it!! 
 

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sarah harry

:) please do and share the link with us

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Greg Etsell

I DID IT ITS CALLED SHADDAP YOU FACE

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Larry Ran

Hi sarah,

You sure "spooned out" a wake-up call to the older generation on this one, me being one of them who thinks that a lot of today's music is vulgar.
You reminded me that we didn't use the four-letter word, but the insinuation was still the same.
"Push It Girl, Push It real good"
Great comeback write sarah.

Peace and Love,
Larry xxx

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