Prickly Pear Pt 1
Poor David
I`m using this poem as a bit of refresher, been stuck in a state of mind for a while. So its more for me that the Cosmos but I thought I would share. Hope you enjoy and God bless anyone named David Pauly (including the baseball player).
David Pauly lost a dare,
Now he had to eat a prickly pear.
So he shrugged his shoulders and bit right in,
but what came next gave him a scare...
*Crack*
He drew back quickly and
Poor David became aware,
That he drew blood
And some of his teeth were no longer there!
So Saturday with the boys
Became a bad Facebook photo
No, not really a camp fire story
But his dentist lost all hope though
So don't be a David
And eat a rock hard pear.
Because simile all you want
But he`ll be back.
I swear.
The Fish of the Sea.
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Inspiration from Kieran! As well as an Etoro ad and a strange occurrence in a Texan bar... Hope you enjoy it. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Gave me a chuckle!
Thanks, Jim! But I just noticed a few spelling mistakes! That's why I don't usually write my work directly onto the Cosmos... Thanks for the Comment. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Awws brilliantly penned and pinned β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Thanks so much Jill, your comments always mean do much. Kind regards. The Fish of the SeaΒ
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Brilliant, made me smile like a maniac. I loved the sense of humour, no matter how unpoetic it seems to everyone else there is a subtle beauty in the way it makes everyone smile!
Awww I'm so glad you enjoyed it Bell! I did enjoy writing it, so I guess that's what poetry is all about! And your right! These beauty in humor too! All the best to you. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea
ππππ Refreshing for you to write and refreshing for us to read. It's good to laugh x
Awww thanks so much, Tina, yes think I needed a mental break. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
We all need a bit of a mental break from time to time π x
Very true! Best wishes to you Tina! Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
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The change of pace......the quickening.......the smiles.......the poetic endeavor proving.......its energy well directed.......high fives.........T xoΒ : )
Thanks so much, Tony, wanted to try something different for a change. Your comments always mean so much. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Fab write...brought a smile to my face ..thankyou my friend π
Awww thanks so much, Marion! That was my intention XD~ Kind regards, your friend. The Fish of the Sea.
Awe Fish you brought a smile. thank you!
Thanks so much Lisa! At least an attempt at humour lol XD. I`m glad you enjoyed it though. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea
Good one TFOTS - I like a nice pear!
Terry.
Haha XD, thanks so much Terry, but perhaps not a prickly one, not raw at least? ;) Thanks for your kind comment though, really appreciated. Best wishes to you and G'day from Aus. TFOTSΒ