Poem -
Someday
How can a person be so cold?
Did being a friend become boring?
Did my loyalty grow old?
I suppose maybe you cannot stay still
And that maybe stability wasn't part of the deal
But did you have to take away what was left of me?
Did you have to make me doubt everything that I wanted to be?
Why did you cause flashbacks?
Back to a snowy state of depression and despair
You're too obsessed with yourself
Scared to death he won't be there
I'm sorry for you
I'm not sure how you live as you do
Flying friend to friend
Dropping pieces of each as you fly on
What is the price that you'll pay?
I suppose we will find out someday
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Hi Paris........love this!!......you've just touched on one of life's Universal themes.........and you've delivered it in truly poetic fashion.......great rhythm and timing here..........and VERY original formatting (love that)......when your friend hurt you and then moved on (and I don't know if this came from a "true" experience of yours).....but.....perhaps in setting him free......and still accepting him, even with his (or her) shortcomings......you will give them license to go out into the world and learn the true value of friendship........and then.......they may come back to you and Love you for having loved them enough to let them go......with no hard feelings.........I love to see poets exploring their emotions.......through self-expression..........you have done yourself well here my friend......so glad I saw this.........you're a gifted writer.............glide on...... 5*s FAV .......smiles............T xx