War

l made it home from war after four years away
Oh how I had looked forward to this special day...

We have been friends for years but lately its seem
All that you do is criticise me
You judge...

First a thick smoke
drifts ashore
no panic ,amongst the water blood and mud
yellow...

This is my first ever poem so any replies / criticism is greatly appreciated.

Straight out of...

The sun sets once more,
lost comrades remembered now,
lest we forget war.

Remembrance day at the wall
by
Jude Kyrie

It is the 11th minute of the 11th hour...

It was so many faded years ago
We were seventeen or eighteen in Nam.
we became friends...

remember the fallen
all the fallen
every one of the fallen
never forget
those...

In the dawns early light the rockets red glare as the bombs going off,As the boys come marching in to war,...

I found him
dressed in Emporer's new clothes,
for what its worth..he had a patriotic scarf...

Barely eighteen he was asked to fight
For his country all day and night
In a battle to face...

Bloodthirst on a bloodbath ground
It floods me with a
Mental sound though
Enemies in a...

Feeling
the butt end
of a rifle
is not pleasant

Seeing the pictures
of...

Muddy water runs between our boots
The tears run through my heart
Mam, say everything will be...

Drones
Bobo, why do they hate me so
I'm laying here covered in blood
I'm only small I...

Running through a battled poppy field
Feeling the brushing of honor
Blood spilt dad told me...